成考英語作文:2015年湖北卷寫作二!
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一、2015年湖北卷真題回放
請根據以下提示,并結合具體事例,用英語寫一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer, you will learn.
注意:1.無須寫標題;2.除詩歌外,文體不限;3.內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例;4.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;5.詞數不少于120,如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。(滿分30分)
Seeing is believing①.Never believe in anything in a hurry before you make a careful research.
From childhood,I was told the saying the great fish eat up the small. I had been taking it for granted until one day when I knew the saying is not always right②.Last year, my father bought me a pet fish as my birthday present with some shrimps as its food.I kept them together in the fish tank, watching them swimming free and happy③.However, later in the afternoon,I was surprised to find it was the fish that was dying. And the killers, the shrimps were chewing on the body④!
So we should have the courage to question,and on no account should we follow anyone like sheep. The more we question, the more we will learn⑤.
二、滿分范文
A man becomes learned by asking questions.In many cases, it is by questioning that we know something clear and learn more and more about the world①.
When I was 12 years old②,I studied in a junior middle school. The subjects became more and more difficult. Frequently, I got confused even about the answers③. However, I was very shy and didn't dare to ask for further explanation. Later my class teacher found my problem and gave me constant encouragement.Day,I enjoyed questioning④,not only knowing the answer but also understanding why it is so.
From this experience I know that no man is born wise or learned. By questioning what is uncertain or not understood⑤,one can make himself more clear-headed and learned.
三、解析:
?、賢hat引導的定語從句進一步解釋questioning的重要性,語句內容豐富,邏輯力強。
②when引導的時間狀語從句前置,自然過渡至講述事件方面,作者深諳文句過渡之道。
③frequently屬很棒的過渡詞,文章結構得以增強。got confused用法純正地道。作者詞匯量和寫作技巧得以充分展示。
?、躣ay by day一天天的。作者表達方式十分新穎獨特,且符合英文行文習慣,無論作為過渡短語還是正文,運用十分巧妙。
?、輙hat引導的賓語從句,詳細闡述從這件事中所獲感想。高級句式表達準確,內容豐富息量大,作者運用復合句能力令人佩服。
四、名師點評
根據高考英語寫作評分原則,內容要點為最基本要求,語法、詞匯為提升要素,結構布局決定分數??v觀此篇寫作,本文在這三方面做得完成的非常成功。when、frequently、however、day by day、from this experience等過渡詞或鏈接短語使文章結構緊湊,行文連貫,讀起來朗朗上口,頗具閱讀美感。內容上文章涵蓋了所有要點,語法方面作者熟練運用各種復雜句式和多種表達方式,結構采用經典的三段式寫作,條理清晰,邏輯合理,可謂臻美??傊?這篇寫作十分出彩!
五、譯文
不恥下問才能有學問。在多數情況下,通過質疑我們才能清楚地了解事物,并對世界了解得越來越多。
在我12歲的時候,我在一所初中學習。學科變得越來越困難。我頻繁地對答案感到困惑。然而,我很害羞,不敢要求進一步的解釋。后來班主任發現了我的問題,給了我不斷的鼓勵。一天天地,我樂意提問,不僅僅只知答案,而且理解為什么會這樣。
從這次經歷中我知道,沒有人天生是聰明的或博學的。通過詢問哪些不確定或不理解的事情,一個人可以讓自己頭腦更清醒,更博學。